Essay Writing :)

Assalammualaikum ,
Hari nih Aku nak practise untuk masuk kelayakkan MRSM . Dia suruh aku buat SUPER DUPER ESSAY . so sekarang nih aku tengah try , okay ke tidak Essay aku ni . Kauorang boleh tolong check tak ? Alaa , kauorang bayangkan jelah yang kauorang ni Guru Pemeriksa UPSR . okay ?

It was a bright sunny Monday , so I decided to go to the park with my friends . I really want to have a nice sweet picnic with them . It is my last year in SK Desa Pandan . o course I will miss them . So by doing this activity , it would be a sweet memory in my life .

First , I called my best friend ever ,  Hanis . I asked her to bring a few party things to make the picnic looks better and greater . Then , I called Izzati to bring her wonderful homemade Redvelvets . Then , I  called Alia , qadirah and hadirah to wear teir most beautiful gown ever . We go to the park by 4.30p.m.

As I arrived , all the party is set with ribbons , balloons and banners . Izzati prepared the redvelvets , Hanis stir the jug of tropical fruit punch with a wooden spoon , while the others setting the plates .

A few minutes later , we have the picnic with lots of joy . we eat and sing together as happy as a lark . The most enjoy full part is when we have a “flour fight”. Our gown are decorated with nice flour , also our faces . As same as ghosts !

It is almost 6.30p.m. Everyone is still fresh but unluckily , they need to go home . With a sad face , we shake hands and go back home . But we have just promised something that someday , we will have a sleepover and watching the movies . And we really hoping that day will be the most Happy day ever. 

Okay tak ? Kauorang comment tau . Aku tak berapa nak pasti , essay aku okay ke tidak . Segala pertolangan dari anda sangat ku hargai . Terima Kasih . :)